Dayon, you are an amazing writer. I will keep saying that until the cows come home. This is just one more example of that. You are able to mine every experience and turn them into these thought-provoking, beautiful opportunities for self-reflection - not just for yourself, but for your readers, too.
I honestly don't think you have any idea of the talent you have to connecting with people's hearts - which is what it really takes to be a good writer.
Keep it up. Drop me a line if you need encouragement or ANYTHING. I'm here!!